3 hours ago, MonCalamariAgainstDrunkDriving said:Another Shinjo! Awesome! Are you also an Outrider, @Zantosa ? I had planned Khenbish as having at least served, if not grown up, in Khanbulak and having lots of siblings. I can be flexible with background to make something work if you wanted to be, say, cousins?
Yes! Shinjo Sayaka is also an outrider. @MonCalamariAgainstDrunkDriving
I actually like the sibling part, and have no issues rewriting/rethinking parts for it if that works for you?
I saw Sayaka as one of the younger children, more left to her own devices than being put into a position of responsibility, with a rather dominant/absent matriarchal mother running the family. Having being raised in Khanbulak works for me, even though they've served differently. Two suggestions:
- Step-siblings. Either with a shared mother or a more complex situation (with some unexpected (as far as that goes for a samurai) mortality rather than some affair).
- Twins. I did write Sayaka's father as dead before her birth, but I'm not committed to that if you've got something else!
Also an older sister, Shinjo Aris a, who's been important to Sayaka. Would like to keep her!