13 hours ago, ExpandingUniverse said:Some of the NPCs you have very kindly made I will simply rename them.. thank you so much
EDIT: Thank you so much for those Rivals and Minions that can be shifted over to use in an Edge campaign
Thanks! Glad to hear you can get some use out of them - I think the upcoming People & Planets section will be particularly useful for stats that can be used in any campaign since most of them are more generic NPCs rather than named characters.
13 hours ago, A7T said:There's an unnecessary ' after Grans in the second paragraph of the Malastare write up. I'd suggest replacing it with the Gran Protectorate, which is the Gran political faction that governs their colonies.
The wayward apostrophe has been vanquished, but I left out the reference to the Protectorate partly to avoid having to define what it is (and thus making the fluff section too long, since Malastare already has one of the longer ones at three paragraphs).