On 6/8/2018 at 3:09 AM, Shiba Gunichi said:I also like that the backmatter mentions shamanism rather than blood sorcery as the traditions the Isawa recognized when discussing the Kaito becoming their own thing. Yobanjin shamanism is cool. Blood sorcery is something I can get quite tiresome about (no, not "tired of," "tiresome about.").
Tsukune having a Toshigoku eye is the kind of cool thematic scarring with potential dire consequences I enjoy in my L5R stories.
I am most seriously pleased, both with how the supernatural elements were treated, with how the Phoenix were portrayed, and with how the Isawa didn't run away with the narrative focus as they so often did in the AEG days.
(no, not "tired of," "tiresome about.") Yeah, but you ended a sentence with a preposition and that's something I will not put up with.
I love the eye scarring - although there is no such thing as a "sickly purple" color, as purple is the one true perfect color. I would love if she gets some form of alternate vision from that.
On 6/8/2018 at 4:33 AM, Kaito Kikaze said:Have you MET the Isawa? I'd be more surprised if there was anyone they DIDN'T have a feud with.
Yeah, how's that impending feud with the Shiba gonna shake out?
Also, AAAAAAAAAAGH! How did I finish it so quickly!? So good! I am a Dragon, but Tsukune is my favorite champion. No! Will we need wait at least 6 more novellas before again receiving a feature-length adventure with her?!