Yes! Legit reason to take a break from writing essays!
The Dead Hulk:
Short and shocking, the way I like them. I’m getting a lot of Aliens references while reading. A nice way of emphasizing the Slaughts as a threat. The incinerating light is a real treat, it will freak the players out
- “turning orcs and tyranids into experimental servitors gets boring if you do it too often”
I think this goes into the “too funny for the pyre”-category
The Tomb of Horrors:
I’ve never played any dungeons and dragons either, so I got nothing there. But as you say it need a bit more fleshing out to become more than mechanical room-dodging.
Idea: Something out-of this-world-dangerous, like how-could-anyone-survive-that freaky, already disabled/destroyed/killed. Erasmus went this way, he probably left traces behind.