Welcome to the proofreading changes sub-forum for the Dark Heresy 2nd Edition Beta.
In this thread, you can list any proofreading changes you find in Chapter XIII: Seeds of Heresy.
Chapter XIII: Seeds of Heresy
p 310: "Cellia, known formerly as the Lady Bountiful"
Should this read "formally" perhaps?
p 312: "Wherever there is desire, he exists. Desire
for power, for knowledge, for conquest, for life
eternal—all these and more drive
morals
"
Mortals, perhaps?
p 315: " If an insurrection were to interfere with his plans for the grand cathedral, he would
be willing to resources
to fight it."
... willing to allocate? Spend?
p 318: "A world with few technological advances, travel here is
mostly on foot, which the Faithful hold as
the
spiritually uplifting."
Remove "the".
p 323: " A
move to topple the leadership could work against some of the threats, but others
might. require
a far more rigorous
cleansing."
There is a misplaced . after might.
p 326: "All Acolytes who survive the adventure should earn 50
experience points for each session of play."
This contradicts the guidelines for Tangible Rewards on p 275, which suggests approx 400xp pr session. Even with a bonus for overcoming the heretical organisations, the total will be lower than the suggested values from chapter XI.
The index at the back of the book has "XIII: Seeds of Heresy" in the footer.
According to the sidebar on page 308 of the adventure, chapter 2 contains sample characters which player's can use rather than making their own. There are no sample characters in chapter 2.
"GMs should encourage players to try out not only the sample characters in Chapter 2, but newly created characters as well."
It's a sidebar for the Beta test in particular, but has GMing advice that will probably be retained in some form in the final product.
Edited by VaeronSeeds of Heresy
Page 313
Criminal Sodality
"...but command power impossible for them to image ."
Should be
"...but command power impossible for them to imagine ."