Presenting
The Storm's Edge
Adventure Supplement
Adapted from
this
mini-adventure
*Updated to v1.2
Edited by Kainrath
Presenting
The Storm's Edge
Adventure Supplement
Adapted from
this
mini-adventure
*Updated to v1.2
Edited by Kainrath
Page 5: Still says "Page X."
"She had" [cut box] "of her subordinates" pretty sure that should be "She had" [cut box] "one of her subordinates."
Page 10: The statblock labeled "Stormtrooper" appears quite similar to the Stormtrooper Sergeant statblock. Was this supposed to be a normal stormtrooper, a sergeant, or something different?
The same statblocks lists Stormtrooper Armor as providing +1 Soak instead of the customary +2.
Other than disagreeing with awarding amounts of XP that aren't increments of 5, that's all I see.
29 minutes ago, P-47 Thunderbolt said:Page 10: The statblock labeled "Stormtrooper" appears quite similar to the Stormtrooper Sergeant statblock. Was this supposed to be a normal stormtrooper, a sergeant, or something different?
I figured the Officer would have a guard of some sort with her...I'm open to to suggestions here. I wasn't sure what to do other than just make it a stormtrooper.
48 minutes ago, Kainrath said:I figured the Officer would have a guard of some sort with her...I'm open to to suggestions here. I wasn't sure what to do other than just make it a stormtrooper.
It could be a Stormtrooper Sergeant, some Stormtrooper minions, or some other manner of Imperial bodyguard.
I doubt she has enough clout to get some of the big guns, but she could easily have a non-standard Imperial bodyguard.
I'd probably just make it a fireteam of Stormtroopers or a Sergeant though.
Thanks for your hard work.
Looks good!
(I've only skimmed parts of it, so no proof-reading from me today.)
Although ... how about putting the current version number somewhere on the cover page?
ETA: Never mind, I just found it on the bottom of the credits pages.
Edited by Bellona