Here's a fan adventure what I wrote:

http://www.chumley.co.uk/wfrp/ghostofmondstille.pdf

It's a ghost story, a bit of social, a bit of combat, a bit of investigation thing.

I just flipped through it. I will definitely be taking a longer look. Thanks for the hard work.

much appriciated

I will def. read through it, I have just skimmed it, but allready I love the fonts (wher can I get such fonts?), layout and graphics. I liked especially how you managed to intergrate the dice symbols with additional effects on the setting and storytelling.

thanks very much

If you like I can give you a review of the adventure once I Have read it?

Thanks,

I'd be happy to hear feedback and comments on it, but I wouldn't go to the trouble of a formal review.

What I'd be most interested in, if someone actuially plays the thing, is hearing how they got on.

The font is just Caslon Antique bold and underlined. Not sure where you get it, but it's quite a common one.

Good work Clive. I hope to have some comments shortly

Jay H

Clive,

My general comments and personal preferences:

• excellent work on the fonts.
• Good job with the dice effects
• I prefer 2 column and or landscape format. I don't print out scenarios anymore (in this age of PDF's) so they are easier to read/run in landscape format.
• I like having a brief synopsis of how the scenario "should run"
• Regional map would be cool, but not necessary
• I like the way that the haunt.
• The Lurchens should have a little more detail (sidebar?) about how they are/have-been dealing with the haunting.
• Definitely a tragedy
• I like that it is concise.
• Imagining how players may mess it up: they may thoroughly search the house before the actual haunting occurs. They may use intimidate or charm to find out more information in the first encounter.
• I'd like see more to interact with in the local grounds.

Otherwise great job :_)

jh

Thanks so much! I encourage you to make more!

Neat adventure! I like the story.

Wow, I saw this post before I even got my copy and decided to ignore it because I just assumed a fan adventure that came out that soon would be terribad. Well I got bored tonight so I dl it and read it and am very pleasantly suprised. Very nice adventure, perfect to throw in amongst a larger campaign to break things up and make the world seem more organic, I especially like the twist of the party seeing the family executed later on.

kudos, and thank you!

Nice job. Looks like it'll be a fun play.

Where did you get the font for the dice symbols from?

Stercrazy said:

cheers

http://www.fantasyflightgames.com/edge_foros_discusion.asp?efid=149&efcid=3&efidt=244781

Lovely work!

The improvements you've made by adding the (flavourful) locations are great.

Now that I've got my WFRP3, I'll hopefully be running this over the weekend (probably after running the demo to get a better handle on the system).

Just a quick note, on p16, you've missed 1 symbol: for the 1 success line, you meant to change the C to one of those neat Challenge Dice symbols.

Thanks for that.

It's updated.

Could you provide a template?

morganj said:

You mean a .doc thing with the styles and fonts? (I'm a word processor moron)

yes please

I've put a doc and a dotx up. Hopefully this is what you want:

http://www.chumley.co.uk/wfrp/wfrp.dotx

http://www.chumley.co.uk/wfrp/wfrp.doc

Monk,

You could also have a .pdf if you want to convert it using CutePDF writer or something like that.

jh

I really like this adventure. One my group has finished its current one, I'd really like to run this for them.

Nice work! Your efforts are appreciated.

This adventure is great! I think it may be the first one I run for my group. Thanks for sharing it!

thank you VERY much for sharing this adventure.

THAT is grim and perillous for some commoners chosen by Destiny without knowing it who have lived no adventure until now... Fear, shadows, mysteries...

An excellent adventure. Thanks.

Just got done reading this. I really like it. I making a few changes for my group but the basic story is really well done!

Thanks!

Wonderful story! So simple and the same time so complex, so true. Excellent job. I will use that after "eye for an eye". Thank you very much )) It fits my PCs and Morr Initiate in.