This is Spike my newest character. Comments are welcome. It is made by Water Soluble Colour Crayons and fotographed instead of scanning it in.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1728/spike.jpg

I decidedto do a little magic in paint

I made another image of her. Trying to make a nice face and dressing her as she is at the campaign start. The other picture is before th campaign starts.

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/555/spike3x.jpg

he makes me think of neol feilding!! now imgaine that in DH!!!

I would say use another medium. Water Soluble Colour Crayons are a tough medium for alot of people to use. Some constructive criticism, While I would say work harder at your art skills, the facial structure, the body, the point is moot since we all need too get better in some ways. Um, basics are probably more important then detail for you. Work on shading in photoshop with the burn and dodge tools and you can easily add some basic shading which will make the art pop out and look more 3D.