http://dusky2005.deviantart.com/art/Wip-427787839

Image is going to have about 5 characters in it...first major action scene from one of our sessions im drawing out. Just wanted to share. I still am working on some requests but getting up at 3am to go to work and by the time i get home im exhausted....but i haven't forgotten your requests who wanted art.

There will be a full color version?

It's looking like a good start, but the angle on the gun seems a little wonky. See below...

Yeah I saw it the moment I scanned it...lol

Looks good, i'll wait patiently for the requests

It's looking like a good start, but the angle on the gun seems a little wonky. See below...

The hand and the barrel can be at different angles given that most pistol grips aren't a 90 degree angle to the barrel. What is concerning is the front face of the grip (just below her pinkie) and the front face of the gun aren't in the same plane. The grip goes from left to right almost perfectly parallel to the bottom of the image, while the barrel goes from bottom left corner to upper right corner of the page. That makes those two faces that should be aligned seem to be off from each other by about 45 degrees.

It's looking like a good start, but the angle on the gun seems a little wonky. See below...

The hand and the barrel can be at different angles given that most pistol grips aren't a 90 degree angle to the barrel. What is concerning is the front face of the grip (just below her pinkie) and the front face of the gun aren't in the same plane. The grip goes from left to right almost perfectly parallel to the bottom of the image, while the barrel goes from bottom left corner to upper right corner of the page. That makes those two faces that should be aligned seem to be off from each other by about 45 degrees.

Yeah was already brought to my attention as above and it was already addressed. changed the angle to match the way her hand is potioned.