I am going to finish this 'great' (really, it is my best fanmade, i think) work. Only i need know if the english words and grammar (i'm spanish) are correct.

Could you see and say if there is any error in the english text? Thanks...

Uf, large post! Now the treacheries...

And last..., the enemies of the secundary deck: Orcs of Dark Forest:

How long have you been doing this

It is awesome! But IMO this is too easy. 1 quest with 7 quest points :/

I love those cards with weak stats, sneaky effects and surge. I also really like locations adding enemies. Every card has awesome idea.

Great work!

If only FFG used this art instead of rejected videogame concept art! Didn't pay attention to the abilities but these cards look so pretty! Especially the locations.

How long have you been doing this

It is awesome! But IMO this is too easy. 1 quest with 7 quest points :/

I love those cards with weak stats, sneaky effects and surge. I also really like locations adding enemies. Every card has awesome idea.

Great work!

It seems easy, but not is certainly easy. Very dificult to kill each hero 2 orcs. And no allies. In fact, the most dificult is really place 7 progress tokens on the quest card.

I would say that the dificult level is: 6 (between 1-7)

Dude that is some sweet art. Love the Orc Camps and the DG Explorers. That's a lot of different cards. 35 of them. No way all them have x3 copies in the Encounter Deck am I right? Do you have a deck list for the encounter deck? That would be nice to see if you have already made one.

Thanks

how long have you been doing it?

Dude that is some sweet art. Love the Orc Camps and the DG Explorers. That's a lot of different cards. 35 of them. No way all them have x3 copies in the Encounter Deck am I right? Do you have a deck list for the encounter deck? That would be nice to see if you have already made one.

Thanks

I am creating a sheet file, but before i want to know if all the english text is correct. In the sheet will be displayed how many copies of each card are included in the encounter deck, and in the Orcs of Dark Forest deck.

how long have you been doing it?

Lol, tooooo much time.

1. On Marauder Hills, if the enemy is a group of orcs then it can say "If marauder hills damage a character..." but if it is just a single guy you are fighting which is what it seems like to me due to just 1 orc on the picture, then it must say "If Marauder hills damages a character....."

2.

It should read instead "If a shadow card with a shadow effect hasn't been dealt to an attacking Orc enemy during combat, deal to that enemy an additional shadow card until dealing him a shadow card with an effect.

got to go but will do more if I have time later.

Ok, thanks, i like these comments. I shall to correct then! Thank you very much...!

How about, it is correct now?

PD: please, tell me if you see more errors

Wow this looks awesome! I want to try it out now.

This is awesome!!

I admit I didn't check everything, since I have to work. I check the cards in the first post. Here are a couple of hints:

Archaic Find

When revealed: Attach this card to the hero...

Response: ...remove all progress tokens from the attached hero...

Dol Guldur Explorer's

The shadow text is introduced with "Sombra" instead of "Shadow:"

Hunter

You have to replace some Spanish here, too. "y" instead of "and" and "Sombra" instead of "Shadow"

Maybe someone else can check the rest, good luck finishing this outstanding work

The words underlined are the ones that need to be added.

Beorning Stream

After Traveling to Beorning stream, the first player may choose 1 Dark Forest location from the staging area. X is the number the first player decides.

After traveling to Carrock Road, the first player choose 1 location from the staging area.....

I see quite a few cards with the same mistake as the one above. So put "the" before "first player" and "staging area" on any other cards that have that mistake.

In abrupt undergrouth it says "x is the double amount of players in the game." Take out the first "the" so it reads "x is double the amount.......

OK, so there needs to be a comma after "Combat Phase"

And put a "the" before the attack symbol and I think the last 14 words should be rephrased. I would say "....higher than the total (Willpower) of all ready characters in play, the discarded card engages the first player.

Will do more later.

This is awesome!!

I admit I didn't check everything, since I have to work. I check the cards in the first post. Here are a couple of hints:

Archaic Find

When revealed: Attach this card to the hero...

Response: ...remove all progress tokens from the attached hero...

Dol Guldur Explorer's

The shadow text is introduced with "Sombra" instead of "Shadow:"

Hunter

You have to replace some Spanish here, too. "y" instead of "and" and "Sombra" instead of "Shadow"

Maybe someone else can check the rest, good luck finishing this outstanding work

Dol Guldur Explorer's and Hunter, lol, it is because first i made the adventure in spanish and after i translated to english. Too many cards, sure i forgot any word, thanks!

About Archaic Find i corrected the first error. However, the second i think this is not an error: therer are several cards that talk about "attached hero" and not "the attached hero": Self Preservation, Great Yew Bow...

OK, so there needs to be a comma after "Combat Phase"

And put a "the" before the attack symbol and I think the last 14 words should be rephrased. I would say "....higher than the total (Willpower) of all ready characters in play, the discarded card engages the first player.

Will do more later.

How about so?

Abrupt Underground last version:

I added the 'the' in all locations (After traveling to X, THE first player...; choose a X location from THE staging area), and last phrase: X is double of the number of players in the game.

And 'THE first players decides' of Beorning Stream is also corrected:

Thanks! What else?

I don't understand this card. Do other people understand this?

you misspelled other by saying ohter.

I would say in the last sentence "...other Orc enemy in play that is not another copy of Orc Patrol"

add an "s" to the word damage. So it reads "damages".

That's all I could find. Great job on the quest. Who knows how the quest works but the cards look great.

Nice, nice..., i have just corrected those cards:

Rising Storm's meaning:

It forces to you to remove progress tokens from quest card.

The first idea: you have to remove 2 progress tokens.

...but sometimes: you have more progress tokens on the quest card than it is required. For example, this quest card: you only need 7 progress tokens, but sometimes, you can place more than 7prog. So this treacherie wouldn't be bad. The treachery forces to you, first: remove progress tokens that you have more than 7. And after: remove 2 more. So the quest card would have: 5 progress tokens.

Does it read so?

The initial quest card flvour text is a little awkward to read and could do with some refining.

http://imageshack.us/a/img822/5554/9w52.jpg

The Proof of the Dark Forest - This implies that they are looking for proof that the dark forest exists! I would change this to something like "The Trial of the Dark Forest"

The flavour text:

A valiant hero, before fighting and proving worthy to lead his army, must first venture into the depths of the Dark Forest.

the next bit confuses me and I don't quite get what you are trying to say

and resist cleaning the forest without orc undergrowth during a given period of time.

do you mean something like:

There he must risk clearing the forest of orc undergrowth within a set period of time.

Ooooh, it is a valiouse counsil for me!

This is the result: