Welcome to the proofreading changes sub-forum for the Dark Heresy 2nd Edition Beta.

In this thread, you can list any proofreading changes you find in Chapter XI: The Game Master.

1st paragraph under "Pre-made Adventures" page 271

Observation: The paragraph ends with the sentence fragment ”Internet, up to and including full-fledged adventures."

Suggestion: Eliminate the sentence fragment.

In the 2nd paragraph under "The Detailed Method" page 275

Observation: The paragraph contains the phrase "A simple encounter might be one that has little real threat to the PCs," but there is no "Simple" difficulty on the chart.

Suggestion: This should read "An Easy encounter might be one that has little real threat to the PCs."