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Chapter I: Playing the Game
On Table 1–7: Sum of SB Carrying , Lifting & Pushing. The entry for Max Carrying Weight of 45kg has a typo, reads as 45Kgg.
In the Only War Beta Corebook it says that spending Fate allows you "Instantly remove 1d5 Damage (this cannot affect Critical Damage)." This is different than the demo mission Eleventh Hour which says it should be 1d10 . Not knowing which was truly produce later leads me to believe there is a discrepancy.
The Sentence: "Abseiling requires climbing gear, a drop harness or at least a good, stout line and requires…"
Should it be: "Abseiling requires climbing gear, a drop harness, or at least a good stout line and requires…"
comma in the wrong place.
"Characters my move through shadow with no penalties, but may only…"
"Characters may move through shadow with no penalties, but may only…"