fairly new looking for cc

By ozziesmiff, in UFS Deck Building

i am fairly new to ufs(2 weeks) and just got done building this deck. i havent playtested it yet and im looking for some ideas/advice.

x1 **Adon**

assets:

x1 such a popular person

actions:

x1 engineered

x1 shadow acrobatics

x1 control the flow

attacks:

x2 kaku kyaku raku

x4 jumping shotei

x1 knee toss

x2 8th bill of judgement

x4 hyakurenko

x4 bo rush

x2jaguar assault

foundation:

x1 light on ones feet

x2 roam the world

x3 bretheren of the coast

x3 legendary legs

x3 cocky

x4 professional soldier

x4 kazama ninja arts

x4 kanzukiryu kakutojutsu

x4 nine lives

x4 natural leader

x1 god of muay thai

x3 dark lado

any advice or critique is greatly appreciated

well i'm assuming that the kill is kanzukiryu xX into Bow Rush into 8th bill for the kill free damage pump on each? Well lets fix this deck as much as we can and i know you want it legacy so i'll do what i can. We might wanna invest in a diff character though, Adon has his uses but meh there's better Air/Void characters than him.

x1 **Adon**

assets:

x1 such a popular person

not sure really why this is in here outside of filling space. If you can get them i'd replace this with 2-3 Olcadon's Mentoring, if nothing else it's a 6cc

actions:

x1 engineered

x1 shadow acrobatics

x1 control the flow

Oh believe me i'm a fan of these 3 cards but they seem SO out of place in this deck, i'd replace these with KFT's instead if nothing else it helps you against your opponents actions that hurt you. Also if you have them Add Hop x3-4 in there to generate momentum if you dont feel comfortable with your odds of drawing Wherabouts.

attacks:

x2 kaku kyaku raku

x4 jumping shotei

x1 knee toss

x2 8th bill of judgement

x4 hyakurenko

x4 bo rush

ok lets see what we can trim out... Kaku Kyaku is gone, Knee Toss is gone, bump the 8th bill up to 3, Hyakurenko meh drop it. Add in 4x Charlie's Fierce Punch as it is good tech against your opponent's control pieces. If you can get a hold of them put in 2-3 Kuzuryu Reppa's that will help with the multiple theme a bit. And we can either keep or drop the Jag assault though be VERY careful about the chaining issues you might hit i tried ti help you by getting a lot of Air/Void attacks only Jumping Shotei does not have air on it.

foundation:

x1 light on ones feet

x2 roam the world

x3 bretheren of the coast

x3 legendary legs

x3 cocky

x4 professional soldier

x4 kazama ninja arts

x4 kanzukiryu kakutojutsu

x4 nine lives

x4 natural leader

x1 god of muay thai

x3 dark lado

ok, we need to decide here... do we want only fire cards here, only void chards here or only air cards here, or do we wanna try to find some that have 2 symbols on them... i'll see what i can do here for ya.

Natural Leader x4
Nine Lives x4
Professional Soldier x4
Bretheren of the Coast x4
Dark Messiah x4[nice damage pump for everything but shotei & 8th bill]
Whereabouts Unknown x4
Aim High x4(whenever you block, that block goes to your momentum)
Soul of Ling-Shing su x4[6cc that adds +2 to your checks]
White Magic x4[more momentum generation]

note this is an outline, do what you think you need to from here

N.J.