The title sort of says it all. I don't really have trouble with the editing and format; I believe it's superior to a lot of other games I've seen and played, learning from the errors of others. Having done both game writing and editing, I am honesty curious to explore other opinions on what others would see as wrong, because I believe years of gaming experience may have numbed me to the flaws that others perceive (I'm so used to bulling my way through loads of rules refuse…).
So please do speak up. I'll never learn anything trammeled in with my own opinions.