Hello,
This is very interesting stuff, but I think I would have begin somewhere else... Where it all begins...
I don't know Tolkien universe very well and before you mention terms like "valar" "maiar" "undying lands" etc, it would have been great to have a chapter dedicated to the mythology/cosmology of Tolkien's world.
Who was there first ? Who created what ? What are undying land ? Who is master of who ?
I only have read the LOTR trilogy, so, I think I miss a lot of stuff to very well understand what you are saying...
Maybe, if you don't want to write it (I can understand...) you could redirect me to a site which would have such an article (reliable...).
Thank you !
