Lightbringer said:
What they appear to have is a grinding campaign across three vast salients with three very different types of opponent and multiple enemy fleets capable of striking behind the lines.
Another potential narrative direction? If through arrogance, poor intel or whatever, they took a Crusade force of strength x through but what they truly needed was strength X, at what point are they going to cut their losses and head back through the Gate? A defensive rather than offensive move. Worlds suddenly turned into another Cadia-variant, etc.
In all fairness, I'm not sure quite sure that the "I'm too busy" from Lord Calixis really stands up to scrutiny. Keeping your eye (or using one of your "trusted lieutenants" to do the same) seems like it would be kind of important for that Crusade in the "adjacent sector." After all, one also imagines that if nothing else it is being used as political coin for shifting relationships, the establishment of specific corporations, etc...
Kage