Hi,
This is my first time writing an adventure for an RPG so I'm looking for some help to improve it, so I thought posting it here would help. I've included the outline of what my idea is:
On the manufactorum planet of *, there exists several trade union type groups. One of the largest is Tradept Manus. Within them are 2 groups - one of them are radicals seeking new technoogy and new methods of doing things to improve efficiency and create new weapons to deliver and bigger and better tithe. The other are conservatives -


The "enemy" is a full blown genestealer cult that had already a lot of opportunity to steals some weapons and supply and stoe it away. And that would be a good idea.