What do you guys think?

Commander: Admiral Raddus

Assault: Most Wanted
Defense: Planetary Ion Cannon
Navigation: Superior Positions

Hammerhead Torpedo Corvette (36)
• External Racks (3)
• Garel's Honor (4)
= 43 Points

MC80 Battle Cruiser (103)
• Gunnery Team (7)
• Leading Shots (4)
• Spinal Armament (9)
• XI7 Turbolasers (6)
= 129 Points

MC75 Ordnance Cruiser (100)
• Cham Syndulla (5)
• Electronic Countermeasures (7)
• Assault Concussion Missiles (7)
• Rapid Reload (8)
• Profundity (7)
= 134 Points

Pelta Assault Ship (56)
• Admiral Raddus (26)
• Hondo Ohnaka (2)
• Shields to Maximum! (6)
• External Racks (3)
= 93 Points

Squadrons:
= 0 Points

Maybe contested outpost instead of planetary ion cannon? will help you control where the opponents fleet will be going, and if the opponent has relay they can just move them out the way. Also I feel like superior positions is a bad choice if you have no squads, solar corona would help get over being outdeployed, and make sure you get those defence tokens during firefights.

I fear solar corona because I'm not sure I can control where I'm going to jump in later.

Well, that was a disaster. Not because of the list per se, but I learned a lot about how not to jump in, suffice to say.