I would roll with the second list, but use Rigged Chute instead of Feedback, and use the point to give Nym VI.

Another one:

-Thweek

AT

M2

Virago

FCS

-Dengar

Link

Hotshot-Copilot

-Fenn

Link

AT

Title

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Dengar strips tokens and focuses up Fenn. Then Fenn wrecks.

That HoCo Mindlink Dengar is pretty cute. It's 38 points with only 2 dice, but maybe two attacks. Hrm. My initial thought it that it won't do enough damage, but I don't necessarily know that that's true. There are a lot of low-agility ships out there. And if Fenn is circling around for another pass, perhaps he feeds a focus to Dengar's TL shot at Range 1... It seems cool and interesting, but I might be hesitant to bring something untested to a tournament.

I looked at what you're about... And I created something I would like to see flown. I call it.... Missile Biggs:

Guri - Attani Mindlink, Autothrusters, curvy roll title - 30

Thweek - FCS, title, title - 28

Manaroo - Attani, tactical jammer, Punishing One, Intel agent

This list is pretty versatile but focuses on Manaroo's ability to pass red target locks. You can fly Guri behind Manaroo and force all non-deadeye missile shots to go at double focus, 4 green dice, autothruster Guri. I also really like the synergy of being able to pass focus to Thweek with Mannaroo and have Guri get her the focus back. It should give the action economy to use those barrel rolls and hit intelled enemies hard.

Out of the initial options, I really like list 2. Thweek and Nym are solid, and the Bumpmaster is a very functional utility. However I like Kleeg's suggestion!

I'm also rather impressed by Ohnoeszz' build. Guri and Thweek are standard but potent, and the Manaroo is a beast of a support ship. However, if you are flying Guri behind Roo, then you're really not capitalizing on Guri's ability.