1 hour ago, SirEuain said:To show how I think this could be fixed, let's go back to the Shadowed Tower. Originally, it was spawned by Atsuki wanting to make a power grab by reviving the Gozoku he'd led during his previous life, but Yojiro and Nimuro had already agreed to place clansmen among each of the Winds' inner circles, the better to manipulate the would-be Emperors. Essentially, the Scorpion and Lion were on their way to making the Gozoku anyway, just without consciously using that term to do it.
What if, instead of Atsuki wanting power, he realized how bad an idea this was? Everything else remains the same, right down to the desperation in using maho, but he's genuinely trying to protect the clan and the throne from the mistakes he made in life? Yojiro would still somewhat correct in that none of the Winds are people that can be trusted to do the job without guidance, but Atsuki is now trying to protect the Scorpion from overstepping their bounds and upsetting the natural order.
I think for a civil war storyline to work, whether it is inter clan or intraclan, there has to be an angle where it makes some sort of sense to get behind that side. Not necessarily that both are equally justified, but that each has their own take on things and there is something interesting and cool about them. That was certainly a problem with Atsuki and the Gozoku: Naseru was about the least plausible imaginable character where it made sense to try and turn him into a puppet for the good of the empire. Atsuki's appeal, as far as one could make out, was 'obey me instead of Naseru, because I am... uh... not afraid to toy with maho?' He did talk a bit about the Toturi dynasty being a disaster, which was fair enough, but he didnt make much of an overall case as I remember.
I think the Gozoku thematically could represent a very compelling and powerful 'big bad' in an intra-clan civil war context: they are the embodiment of the everpresent faction within Rokugani society that puts family ahead of empire. Who obey their father before their lord, their daimyo before their champion, their champion before the emperor. If anything, this was the normal set of allegiances in historical feudal societies prior to the emergence of a class of professional bureacrats. This tendency of allegiance resists centralization and tries to replace central authority with figurehead monarchs whose power is limited to the capital. And half of Rokugan could probably get behind that.
So I think Atsuki probably would have worked better, less if he had been trying to support a strong emperor, but more if his M.O. had been less villainous and more traditonalist. The best leader of the Gozoku would have been a Daimyo from a respected family like the Ikoma or the Asahina, someone who wasnt triply disqualified from being trusted by being a scorpion who lied about his identity while building up a secret conspiracy of maho users.