OK, If anybody recalls, I was very critical of the first Aftermath book's writing style. This one (and the one in between) has been better in that regard, so I'm going to save my criticism for the story itself.
So, what's the big secret here? Is Gallius Rax actually Snoke? What is the secret of Jakku? Read on...
Rax is not Snoke. He's not even much of a leader really. He's a zealot suicide bomber, and Jakku is his bomb vest. Yep, the whole plot is to destroy what remains of the Empire (along with any pesky New Republic types that happen to be nearby) by setting Jakku to self-destruct. Yep again, that super secret "Observatory" on Jakku is just the detonator for making the planet go BOOM. It's all the story of the Emperor's "Contingency" which is to burn his whole Empire to the ground so nobody else can rule it. It's pretty cartoonish IMO.
Oh, Rax doesn't plan to die there though, because he's Super Evil and plans to head into the Unknown Regions with his merry band of fanatical child soldiers. He'll form a new society outside of known space and eventually return to wipe out the corrupt fools that remain behind. It's like Kerensky's Exodus from BattleTech that leads to the Clans only with the stupid turned up to 11.
Since we all know that Jakku survives, we know the plan fails. However, we have a really stupid battle described along with plenty of hokey excuses for how starships get pulled down to the surface more-or-less intact. We have more ramming in space battles (why is this becoming such a thing?), and somehow a rebel battleship gets blown to hell with turbolaser salvos literally punching all the way through it, but its Super-Mega-Awesome-Tractor-Beam can still power-up and wrangle a Super Star Destroyer to the ground (yeeee-hah!).
This book drips with guest appearances: Lando's back. Remember him? JJ Abrams didn't. We also get to see a pathetic continuation of Jar Jar's later years and appearances by Dengar and Embo.
After this, my opinion of the new canon continues to drop. I need something to give me a new hope...
Edited by HappyDaze