A couple more submissions are in!

X-wing/Y-wing aces pack: "Rebel Veterans"

E-wing aces pack: "Advanced Enhancements"

Kudos to Rob Taylor's Rebel Veterans expansion. Only thing in the entire collection that may need to be changed is a specification as to which die is capable of being rerolled with Blind Spot, but as I'm pretty sure you aren't capable of rolling an opponents dice, I don't even think that needs to be changed. He spells maneuver not as I am used to seeing, but if I recall correctly that is a perfectly acceptable spelling in other parts of the world.

The Advanced Enhancements expansion has some things to change. Gonna try to make my reviews a little more concise I think. Some of these need better punctuation for ease of reading so keep an eye out for that even if the wording is largely the same.

Joph Seastriker should read- "After you perform a maneuver, if your maneuver template overlapped an obstacle, you may assign yourself a focus or evade token."

Kirney Slane should read- "At the start of the activation phase, you may choose a ship at range 1-2 and look at their chosen maneuver. If you do, you may receive a stress to rotate your dial to another maneuver."

Garik Loran should read- "After acquiring a target lock, choose a friendly ship at Range 1-2. That ship may immediately perform a free action.

So just a heads up on this one. as currently worded, Garik is mini Vader, as a ship is friendly to itself. So, effectively, Garik can always perform a 2nd action after he performs a target lock. If this is not your intent, and you desire the free action to be exclusively for other friendly ships, it will need to say "another friendly ship" instead of a friendly ship.

Greer Sonnel should read- "Once per turn, after you execute a maneuver, you may execute a second maneuver on this ship's dial. If you do, suffer 1 damage"

New Republic Retrofits should read- "Your upgrade bar gains 1 <tech icon> upgrade icon. If you equip a <tech icon> upgrade, its squad point cost is reduced by 3 (to a minimum of 0)."

Gonna assume you don't want to travel into the world of unintentional negative cost upgrades, so gonna put the minimum of 0 clause in there.

Sealed Astromech should read- "If this ship is equipped with an <astromech icon> upgrade, increase your hull value by 1."

Nose Cone Sensor Array should read- "At the beginning of the combat phase, you may acquire a target lock on an enemy ship at range 1."

BB Unit should read (and taking some liberty in changing this one to make it simpler and an easier trigger to remember)- "Once per round, after an attack is performed against you, you may remove a stress token from your ship."

Vape should read- "After you acquire a target lock, you may assign 1 evade token to your ship."

Tonin and Blood Burn just need little changes. "the" before the action icon on Tonin, and a comma after "maneuver" on Blood Burn.

I am Rob T, thank you for the praise.

Yeah I think Blind Spot is worded like most cards that let 'you' reroll a die. But can easily be changed to "may reroll 1 attack die" for clarity if needed.

And yes, it is the British spelling of 'maneuver' Again, if it needs changing over, easily done.

A couple more submissions are in!

X-wing/Y-wing aces pack: "Rebel Veterans"

E-wing aces pack: "Advanced Enhancements"

Kudos to Rob Taylor's Rebel Veterans expansion. Only thing in the entire collection that may need to be changed is a specification as to which die is capable of being rerolled with Blind Spot, but as I'm pretty sure you aren't capable of rolling an opponents dice, I don't even think that needs to be changed. He spells maneuver not as I am used to seeing, but if I recall correctly that is a perfectly acceptable spelling in other parts of the world.

The Advanced Enhancements expansion has some things to change. Gonna try to make my reviews a little more concise I think. Some of these need better punctuation for ease of reading so keep an eye out for that even if the wording is largely the same.

Joph Seastriker should read- "After you perform a maneuver, if your maneuver template overlapped an obstacle, you may assign yourself a focus or evade token."

Kirney Slane should read- "At the start of the activation phase, you may choose a ship at range 1-2 and look at their chosen maneuver. If you do, you may receive a stress to rotate your dial to another maneuver."

Garik Loran should read- "After acquiring a target lock, choose a friendly ship at Range 1-2. That ship may immediately perform a free action.

So just a heads up on this one. as currently worded, Garik is mini Vader, as a ship is friendly to itself. So, effectively, Garik can always perform a 2nd action after he performs a target lock. If this is not your intent, and you desire the free action to be exclusively for other friendly ships, it will need to say "another friendly ship" instead of a friendly ship.

Greer Sonnel should read- "Once per turn, after you execute a maneuver, you may execute a second maneuver on this ship's dial. If you do, suffer 1 damage"

New Republic Retrofits should read- "Your upgrade bar gains 1 <tech icon> upgrade icon. If you equip a <tech icon> upgrade, its squad point cost is reduced by 3 (to a minimum of 0)."

Gonna assume you don't want to travel into the world of unintentional negative cost upgrades, so gonna put the minimum of 0 clause in there.

Sealed Astromech should read- "If this ship is equipped with an <astromech icon> upgrade, increase your hull value by 1."

Nose Cone Sensor Array should read- "At the beginning of the combat phase, you may acquire a target lock on an enemy ship at range 1."

BB Unit should read (and taking some liberty in changing this one to make it simpler and an easier trigger to remember)- "Once per round, after an attack is performed against you, you may remove a stress token from your ship."

Vape should read- "After you acquire a target lock, you may assign 1 evade token to your ship."

Tonin and Blood Burn just need little changes. "the" before the action icon on Tonin, and a comma after "maneuver" on Blood Burn.

Yeah that was intentional for Garrik

I'm not sure if that's too powerful or not but it felt right when I played it a little bit.

Thank you for the others I will fix those now

Let me ask: we can submit up to 2 expansions for each phase (faction), right?

If yes, I will submit my Phoenix Squadron "Ace" pack and my N-1 Starfighter custom expansion.

Let me ask: we can submit up to 2 expansions for each phase (faction), right?

If yes, I will submit my Phoenix Squadron "Ace" pack and my N-1 Starfighter custom expansion.

Let me ask: we can submit up to 2 expansions for each phase (faction), right?

If yes, I will submit my Phoenix Squadron "Ace" pack and my N-1 Starfighter custom expansion.

my reading was 2 entries total.

Rakaydos is correct; the general guidance is two entries total. I will accept up to 4 entries max from any one participant, but my acceptance of anything past 2 entries depends on the entry quality and any need for entries in a particular category (i.e. if there is only 1 entry for a category I will accept an entry past your 2 guaranteed entries)

What did he use for the astromechs in the E-wing aces pack?

All except nosecone sensors

Form filled.

How do I submit my N-1 expansion? I put it in my Google Drive (is that correct?).

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4bqkw1g3G1aUmdINEtuUTNsc2s

You can submit expansions by emailing them to [email protected]

You can submit expansions by emailing them to [email protected]

Doing it now.

Can you guys help me to improve/revise this?

Rotating Cockpit and Multi-Cannon based on Rakaydos' upgrade cards. Coming soon: pilots.

If you do like the original as well, you can have permission to use my card in your pack....

Rotating Cockpit and Multi-Cannon based on Rakaydos' upgrade cards. Coming soon: pilots.

I am of course biased toward the originals, particularly on Gyro Stabilization System- an extra point and a 2 stress limit to open all red maneuvers and allow barrel rolling for the cockpit (not just making it faster, but opening up the bwings full dial, as long as Iit doesnt get TOO stressed)

If you do like the original as well, you can have permission to use my card in your pack....

I think I will include the red turns (but I think the K-turns would be too much).

But sure, I will add your card as an alternative. People can decide which one to keep later.

Rotating Cockpit and Multi-Cannon based on Rakaydos' upgrade cards. Coming soon: pilots.

I am of course biased toward the originals, particularly on Gyro Stabilization System- an extra point and a 2 stress limit to open all red maneuvers and allow barrel rolling for the cockpit (not just making it faster, but opening up the bwings full dial, as long as Iit doesnt get TOO stressed)

If you do like the original as well, you can have permission to use my card in your pack....

I think I will include the red turns (but I think the K-turns would be too much).

But sure, I will add your card as an alternative. People can decide which one to keep later.

On a side note can any of you guys give me advice on how to improve enhanced advancements

Besides the grammar obviously

I'm sure we'll be flush with them, but I'll be submitting my Rebel Vets this week! Just need to finish up a generic upgrade and fine tune some points.

First post is updated with new submissions (if you don't see yours send me an email at [email protected]

CURRENT SUBMISSIONS:

The Rebellion's Own

Rebel Veterans

Advanced Enhancements

Veterans from Dac and Beyond

N1 Naboo Starfighter

N-1 Starfighter

Looks like we have dueling N-1 starfighters!

Looks like we have dueling N-1 starfighters!

And dueling X-Wings, Y-Wings, B-Wings, A-Wings... hopefully we can get the better stuff of each one?

Just submitted my Phoenix Squadron pack.

Just submitted my Phoenix Squadron pack.

added - but by my count you've got one too many A-wing fix cards in the pack; you'll need to drop one to meet the expansion card limits.

Just submitted my Phoenix Squadron pack.

added - but by my count you've got one too many A-wing fix cards in the pack; you'll need to drop one to meet the expansion card limits.

Can the community (or committee) choose which cards to keep when in the balance "phase"?

EDIT: hmmm I think I figured out how to fix this.

First post is updated with new submissions (if you don't see yours send me an email at [email protected]

CURRENT SUBMISSIONS:

The Rebellion's Own

Rebel Veterans

Advanced Enhancements

Veterans from Dac and Beyond

N1 Naboo Starfighter

N-1 Starfighter

Looks like we have dueling N-1 starfighters!

I submitted an updated enhanced advancements i was just wondering if you got it

First post is updated with new submissions (if you don't see yours send me an email at [email protected]

CURRENT SUBMISSIONS:

The Rebellion's Own

Rebel Veterans

Advanced Enhancements

Veterans from Dac and Beyond

N1 Naboo Starfighter

N-1 Starfighter

Looks like we have dueling N-1 starfighters!

I submitted an updated enhanced advancements i was just wondering if you got it

I think I put in the updated one? Check the links and see if it looks right.

First post is updated with new submissions (if you don't see yours send me an email at [email protected]

CURRENT SUBMISSIONS:

The Rebellion's Own

Rebel Veterans

Advanced Enhancements

Veterans from Dac and Beyond

N1 Naboo Starfighter

N-1 Starfighter

Looks like we have dueling N-1 starfighters!

I submitted an updated enhanced advancements i was just wondering if you got it

I think I put in the updated one? Check the links and see if it looks right.

I just clicked the link and its the old one

That link should be updated now with your latest version Tailsgod, sorry for the laggy response

There's a little less than a week for everyone to get their submissions in!