I'm not really looking through the character, because I'm not good enough to backtrack and calculate what your did and everything. But maybe you might want to do what I did with Erza at the bottom of the page. I laid out exactly what I used my free skills on, my character generation experience, my knight level experience, and my credits on. This might make it easier for you or for use to identify the problems. Plus it promotes better book keeping, which really is essential for smooth roleplaying

How could you have a force rating of 2 and have upgraded your melee and ranged light to 5 each. Something is definitely off

Done

Sorry. You don't have to have a limit on species( it doesn't make a difference to me)

Second, if I see it's rules, it works with me

Unfortunately , I can't read it.

I put it right there. What's unreadable to you?

Unless you mean the character sheet, in which case... it's not finished, so I haven't posted it yet.

No Odds black market sheet

We are locked up for being force users ( I mean, you are)

Can I be locked up for just being a nuisance? Like can my force sensitivity go unnoticed for a while?

Is my character ok,http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

Is my character ok,http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

You've still spent more XP on Ranged - Light and Melee than you actually have, and that's just looking at those two skills.

Is my character ok,http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

With just your force powers and melee and ranged light. You have -70XP. That's not counting your talents. With talents a -90 XP

Done

Whats done? Because if you did what I suggest by laying everything out we would know exactly where the issues are and we would be able to help guide you to the correct stats

I did the math with him. His xp and ¢ problem is solved

Well let us know when it gets updated.

And where did you stand on that black market sheet? I'm a little unsure of your answer.

OK better? http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

I couldn't read it so don't use it.

BTW I found mistake in math fixing.

OK better? http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

I commented in the PM thread.

Done I hope ,http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

Now, if I'm counting right, you've only spent 120 of your Knight Level XP. Since you didn't spend your entire starting allotment, you have 50 XP left.

Also, where is that extra 2 soak coming from? You didn't buy armor that I can see.

Done I hope ,http://swsheets.com/c/idh3i8r1p-sabrina#

Your strain threshold seems off since it looks like you have taken Grit but didn't take dedication.

Soak also doesn't add up - looks 2 points too high.

Haven't mathed our the actual stats, Talents, and everything you spent xp on, but looks like you spent 90 xp on just Ranged (Light) and Melee skills -- nothing wrong with this assuming the remaining xp you spent is correct. Just noting that is a lot of xp to spend on a starting character on skills. You also spent 100 on characteristics -- again, nothing wrong with this, just stuff I could calculate while away from the books.

He got the extra soak from armour he didn't record

BTW the real spelling is dandoran

How is is coming along with DoomFighters character? Other than that and we are ready to go right?

I haven't seen ions character. Other than that yes

Ah yes, I did forget that she hasn't posted her character. But has Doom figured out their issues?

I apologize for making gender assumptions

"She" is fine, no worries.

And I'm just trying to decide whether I need to buy anything else, because I get the impression Matt's gonna get rid of leftover credits? If not, I'm gonna keep some in reserve to mod and build stuff. If so... can I just buy a bunch of parts? Since I'm an Artisan, a good part of my utility is tied to my ability to build and mod gear.

Edit: On second thought, I'd rather buy the parts either way.