Rage is a pretty cool ept on the right ship - I've been experimenting with crackshot/rage green squadrons - but willfully double-stressing your list's two aces is one hell of a disadvantage, especially when the dials aren't that green-heavy. Poe in particular lives or dies by his focus.
As my homeboy Aristotle said, over 2200 years ago, one 'swallow does not a summer make'. Get back on your horse and go again.
(Oh, and kill palp. You have the ps to see where the big mook is deploying, so just go hunt that white whale.)