A friend and I made a "TO for Dummies"

By Holmelund, in X-Wing

pg 2, "That way you safe a lot of time..." edit should be save.

pg. 3, score sheets should not be capitalized.

pg 4, "arch of fire" edit, I believe should be arc of fire

You also have exclamation points both before and after the sentences, is there a reason for this? consistency is key.

pg 5, "Be prepared that it might slip slightly..." This sentence is awkward.

You should note that you are also not directly affiliated with Cryodex.

Edited by Luke C

Thanks for the input :)