They look good but need some refinement. A lot of it is phrasing which as Bab said can be sorted out later as long as the intent is clear.
Potential issues are Oovoo Security Patrol, which allows Activation phase stressing when paired with Tactician (something FFG avoids as the Hand Your Dial to your opponent effect isn't meant to be one the opponent can trigger) and Rapid Fire Cannons is more of an NPE/power issue: it's a stressless Stresshog at R1-2. FFG made Tactician limited to stop mass stress stacking.
I could put on Oovoo "This must be outside your primary firing arc", though that will then make it a harder upgrade to utilize but potentially really interesting for an imperial player?
Rapid Fire is supposed to be a 4 point stress cannon that can really only put with Tactican on Yv-666, Firepray, and the Shuttle all which could double stress without stress from Gunner/Tactican.























