Hiya all! So, I have gotten myself into the position of creating a unique Force Power. The background of the story is that the PCs have taken over the Dawn Temple from the Beginner's Box, and they've taken it upon themselves to refurbish it and bring it back into operation.
In the process, they were able to capture Rav Naraan from the expansion adventure and have placed him in stasis, awaiting a chance to rehabilitate him. This is something the PCs haven't forgotten in the ensuing 6 months of game play, and though they have taken to smuggling in order to get the money together the rebuild and resupply the temple (a task they aren't even close to completing) they have never forgotten their desire to help Rav Naraan.
Recently, they have learned of a hero of the Clone Wars named Aesa Aielia, who was renowned for her ability to seek out those who had succumbed to the Dark Side and bring them back to the Light. Shortly before the Clone Wars erupted into full scare War, the Supreme Chancellor placed her in charge of an exploration mission called the Outward Bound Project. Tasked with exploring the Unknown Regions, and eventually using a rare and experimental hyperdrive to go beyond the known galaxy into extra galactic regions, she left with a microcosm of the Republic, from a small contingent of Jedi, to Senatorial assistants, construction experts, colonists and scientists, to set up a colony far, far away.
They were never heard from again.
Recently, however, they have discovered evidence indicating that Aesa might still exist, and are about to go on a grand adventure to find her. At the conclusion of which, the PCs will have access to her Force Power. Which is what I need to make.
This is the current attempt, but I was hoping to get your feedback on it. The purpose of this Force Power is to act in a similar fashion to the Suppress power, but only in regards to those consumed by the Dark Side. Additionally, deeper in the tree it gives a means by which a Force User can redeem those fallen to the dark side.
Here is the current version:
Some notes on feedback; I've already hinted at the power's existence, so I'm committed to creating something, and I'm aware that this is not something everyone will think is a good idea, so any "this is a bad idea" "it's not possible in the context" etc, post will miss the point entirely. What I really need is people to give me potential problems, out of the box ideas on other ways the power could work, or constructive ideas on where to place the balance in redemption.
Some notes on Redemption per the Core Rulebook: A Dark Side Force User that raises their morality score to 70 or higher is redeemed in the eyes of the Force and is once again considered to be a Light Side Force User even if their score later lowers below 70. If they again drop below 30, then they once more are considered a Dark Side Force User.