If I get the JM5000 before my store champs, I will fly this:

Talonbane Cobra: Crack Shot, Glitterstim, Engine Upgrade

Syndicate Thug: Twin Laser Turret, Unhinged Astromech

Trandoshan Slaver: Boba Fett, Gunner, “Gonk”, Glitterstim, Tactical Jammer

Any thoughts or critiques?

My only tidbit would be to drop the tactical jammer, since it isn't really a major part of the list, so you have an initiative bid for talonbane, maybe let him last a little longer.