In the second section, in a few places it suggest bargaining with the survivors / Harsol / Cratala. Some of the bargaining involves the PCs getting the survivors better equipment (like a better generator to run power to their camp (page 69 under "generator"). Which is fine, makes sense.
But then shortly after the Imperials floated and attack their camp. Thus ending the survivors dreams to stay on the planet, because even if they defeat the Imperials, Imperials will have enforcements arrive later.
So... If the survivors are going to want to leave, why would they want new equipment later on? The Imperial attack and knowing where the survivors are, nullifies a lot of the bargaining the book suggests you do, making all that useless, so why does it suggest that in the first place?