Vessery gets to attack first, and between Tomax and Alozen, there should always be a target lock for Vessery to take advantage of. Vessery shoots first, so Tomax won't have an issue with using his TL, and between Crack Shot, Tractor Beam, and Guidance Chips, Bren should have very little issue getting in some heavy hits. The only issue with this is I'm not certain how often I'd be able to get Alozen in range 1 for his ability, so most of his actions would have to be Target Lock.
I've also thought about using a Bomber Shuttle and Vader to support him:
I'm not so sold on this one, though. Bit more control oriented, with the shuttle being able to work sort of as a stress bot, while passing focus out to Vessery and Vader as needed.
What would you guys do for lists like this?