Here is my review of the Armada terrain Space Rocks made by www.space-rocks.net

This time I went by a outline style script so any questions comments to concerns, thoughts etc are welcome as always.

Enjoy!

This is better than some of the previous videos. Definitely longer than it needed to be. But an improvement none the less. Keep on scripting the videos and consider timing yourself or editing some of the excess duplication of statements to bring your length down and keeping yourself on point.

For anyone drilling holes, a good tip is using masking tape on your bit to limit how deep you go. That way you have a point of reference on how far you have gone.

Edit- Stupid smartphone... can't type worth a ****.

How is it longer than it needed to be?

It is a review. I was pretty concise about what you get. Made sure to cover the quality and price, and showed almost all of the models that come with it.

I am confused on how this could see any significant amount shorter without sounding robotic and impersonal.

How is it longer than it needed to be?

It is a review. I was pretty concise about what you get. Made sure to cover the quality and price, and showed almost all of the models that come with it.

I am confused on how this could see any significant amount shorter without sounding robotic and impersonal.

Take a still photo of what comes in a set. Label the photo with the various pieces.

Show maybe 1 of the space rocks to demonstrate detail as you did with the cr90 for example.

On the photo of each set, include price.

this will shorten the length quite a bit. You can then go on to review.

Just a suggestion.

Thx for the review

That feels impersonal because a single still of a rock does not show what the other rocks and pieces look like.

If you noticed in the review, there were different colors on the rocks. Some were brown with a grey dry brush, another set was dark grey and a light grey dry brush

The biggest thing that sticks in my head as a time sink is where you repeat "I've got an issue with..." for several minutes about the same bubbling issue on different rocks.

It's like you'll use photos to show the stuff on an active play field, but didn't just take a photo of multiple quality issues and just lump that into a single statement/segment.

The ramble about comparing to previous experiences WORKS and you shouldn't apologize for it. Your start was solid, and you kept to a script, but you eventually broke down felt like you stuck on just on digging through each piece to find every problem. Maybe you need to shoot for small bites and edit them together (if that's possible).

I'm not trying to put you down. You're doing more than I'm willing to show off the game (and definitely sinking more cash, time, and effort).

The biggest thing that sticks in my head as a time sink is where you repeat "I've got an issue with..." for several minutes about the same bubbling issue on different rocks.

It's like you'll use photos to show the stuff on an active play field, but didn't just take a photo of multiple quality issues and just lump that into a single statement/segment.

The ramble about comparing to previous experiences WORKS and you shouldn't apologize for it. Your start was solid, and you kept to a script, but you eventually broke down felt like you stuck on just on digging through each piece to find every problem. Maybe you need to shoot for small bites and edit them together (if that's possible).

I'm not trying to put you down. You're doing more than I'm willing to show off the game (and definitely sinking more cash, time, and effort).

That feels impersonal because a single still of a rock does not show what the other rocks and pieces look like.

If you noticed in the review, there were different colors on the rocks. Some were brown with a grey dry brush, another set was dark grey and a light grey dry brush

I meant a still of everything in a set. Each piece.

Show each set in a still that's labeled.

Then set up all the rocks and all the ships on a table and you can review and so on. This gives a nice "what you play" look but keeps it a bit shorter.

Just my humble opinion of course! Still enjoyed and appreciate you making it either way

That feels impersonal because a single still of a rock does not show what the other rocks and pieces look like.

If you noticed in the review, there were different colors on the rocks. Some were brown with a grey dry brush, another set was dark grey and a light grey dry brush

I meant a still of everything in a set. Each piece.

Show each set in a still that's labeled.

Then set up all the rocks and all the ships on a table and you can review and so on. This gives a nice "what you play" look but keeps it a bit shorter.

Just my humble opinion of course! Still enjoyed and appreciate you making it either way

Nice job, this helped basically cement my decision to get these.

Enjoy! Totally worth the expense.

My experience with my Space Rocks is that they look beautiful and make for a nice addition to game photography. However once the game gets going and the ships are fighters are getting close to all the obstructions we take all of the Space Rocks off the board because they become an actual impediment to play. Of course when it comes time for an end of turn picture, they go back on the board briefly.

Oh the only time I have used them we kept them on. So far they are great. When a ship is going to overlap we take it off.