I got a bit crazy the other day and began writing a campaign for myself and a good friend which would feature both our favored factions, Empire(me) and Scum (him). I've never written a campaign before and as I near completion I was wondering if anyone out there on the inter-webs would take a few minutes to take a look over what I have so far and provide some feedback. Any questions, comments, issues, criticism or concerns are all greatly welcomed.
Thank in advance and if for some reason you like it please share it with whomever you want.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8q0jPi7YRzxZ29rTjNlbEI2QW8/view?usp=sharing