Scum: catch me if you can
I like the idea, but I am not too keen on Palob's upgrades. Stay on Target is better on higher PS. At 5, Palob is unlikely to get much use out of it, and even if he could, he doesn't necessarily need more focus tokens (assuming he's able to steal some and slow roll early to get a modest pile pre-engagement). I kinda like K4 droid better to increase his damage output (since if you are stressing him, you need to do the geen moves next turn anyway).
Stay on target is not too bad on Palob as it does do a nice combo for him. Since he's ps5, it won't let him chase down fel, but it will let him outmaneuver attempts to block him.
But the hawk's dial means he would mostly be doing 2-speed maneuvers regardless, which doesn't get you very far to bump or dodge.
It does seem like a fun list though, let us know how it actually performs.