Off Topic: Feedback on RPG Rules

By EliasWindrider, in Star Wars: Edge of the Empire RPG

Hi All,

In another thread

http://community.fantasyflightgames.com/index.php?/topic/128630-unofficial-survey-what-non-star-wars-ffg-products-would-you-like-to-see/page-3#entry1362534

about what other RPGs we'd like to see, I mentioned a homebrew system I've made. But it got me to thinking, this would be a good community to get feedback from, particularly since it's a game with a lot of narrative mechanics, and FFG star wars is pretty much king of the hill in terms of narrative RPGs. There wasn't a separate forum for homebrew games, and the Game Masters forum doesn't get much traffic, and really the audience I'd like to reach is here, so without further a do...

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwceW2DLkm6qWnowNzQtOHZhX0E/view?usp=sharing

this is a universal game engine that should work for most settings.

here's a blank character sheet,

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwceW2DLkm6qenVEY3I1UmdnLUU/view?usp=sharing

and here's a filled out character sheet for a tradditional fantasy setting

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwceW2DLkm6qUFhCdl9sMWRFM2s/view?usp=sharing

So if you all could give me some feedback that would be appreciated.

OK a whole bunch of you have read this thread. I assume that a whole bunch of you also downloaded it. Do you have some feedback?