Just a small knit-pick, my Talassarian* Tempest Blade seems to have acquired an extra "l" -.-
Besides that, everything else seems to be spelt correctly, though Eager Recruit doesn't make any sense fluff-wise, SM Chapters have no Recruits, they have Aspirants (pre-Op) and Neophytes (post-Op/Scout), followed by Initiates (full Marine / aka Brother.)
If anyone else comes across a mispelling or such feel free to post, let's keep things consistent.
Also, Istvaan is Istvaan, like Kayvaan Shrike, I hate FW being dumb and changing it to Isstvan... but that's another battle for another day.
Edited by Phaedros