I am trying to put together a list of all the typos, grammar mistakes, logical errors or anything else that could be fixed in the book in case fantasy flight ever decides to do a second printing of the book and fix these mistakes.
Please reply if you see any other mistakes in the book. Try to keep replies in the same format so I can add to the original post.
Page:
Location:
Type:
Description:
Quote:
Correction(if available):
Page: downloadable Character Record Sheet
Location: Top
Type: Translation
Description: Race was kept in spanish on the pdf but not in the book.
Quote: "Raza"
Correction(if available): 'Raza' should be 'Race'.
Error Slayer: Brogan
Page: Character Record Sheet
Location: Equipment
Type: Typo
Description: Jewelry and Possessions Gold are misspelled.
Quote: “Posesions”, "Glod" and “Jewellery”
Page: 1
Location: Cover Illustration
Type: Dead URL
Description: The URL no longer works for Kami
Quote: " homepage.mac.com/isap "
Page: 1
Location: Interior Illustrations
Type: Misspelling
Description: URL is missspelled
Quote: " wen-m.teviantart.com "
Correction:
http://wen-m.deviantart.com/gallery/
Page: 1, 4, 13, 61, 62, 112, 140, 159, 237, 254, 256, 290, 305
Location: Interior Illustrations
Type: Inconsistency
Description: When Wataru Kamiya is given credit for a piece of art it is as Kamiwata and then a year. It would be more conitenant if page 1 read as 'Wataru "Kamiwata" Kamiya' or if the citations were "Wataru Kamiya", but haveing a different name on the first page than on the citations is confusing..
Quote: "Wataru Kamiya" and "Kamiwata"
Page: 1, 6, 8, 10, 15, 21, 23, 25, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 46, 58, 59, 84, 87, 99, 116, 156, 166, 178, 180, 181, 195, 247, 258, 278, 280, 298, 299, 300, 301, 303, 304, 308, 309, 310, 311, 312.
Location: The last person in Interior Illustrations on first page and near binding everywhere else.
Type: Spelling
Description: It appears as "Alicia Guillen" everywhere except on the first page where is "Alícia Guillem". I don't what is correct. If it is 'm' or 'n' at the end and if it is 'i' or 'í' in the first name.
Quote: "Alícia Guillem" & "Alicia Guillen"
Page: 5
Location: 1st column , seventh paragraph
Type: Awkward Phrase
Description: The phrase "Now you are starting?" makes little sense in the context of what has been said.
Quote: “Celia: That’s unusual (she says, a little surprised), cemeteries are usually behind churches, not in front.
Lemures: Now you're starting? Come on, we go around the cementery."
Page: 14, 25
Location: sample character generation (both pages)
Type: logic
Description: The character Celia gets +20 unarmed initiative bonus even though she wears armor and uses a weapon.
Quote: 14: "Finally, since she goes unarmed and does not wear any armor, her player adds the unarmed Initiative bonus of 20 ... Her final Initiative score is 75."
25: "He chooses a sabre as her primary weapon ... Next, Celia's player spends 50 DP on the Wear Armor ability ... an Initiative of 75."
Error Slayer: Methuselah
Page: Page 65
Location: Top Second column
Type: Logic
Description: Large sack is cheaper than a small sack.
Quote: "Large sack 1 SC; Small Sack 2SC"
Error Slayer: Tonest Denon-bor
Correction(if available):
Quote from: exarkfr on January 25, 2009, 05:16:14 am
Large sack is 1 SP ; Small sack should be 2 CC
Page: 71
Location: Table 30
Type: Logic
Description: Range is in meter while the rest of the book uses feet.
Quote: none needed
Page: 102
Location: Added State chart
Type: Typo
Description: 'Coma' is misspelled 'Comma'.
Quote: "Comma"
Error Slayer: Methuselah
Page: 110
Location: Box X
Type: Typo
Description: "impossible:" is repeated.
Quote:"Impossible: Impossible:"
Page: 148
Location: Petrify Effect
Type: Typo
Description: Misspelled target
Quote: “The tatget of this spell can resist its affects by passing a MR check of 120 Difficulty.”
Page: 149
Location: Gravity Increment Effect
Type: Logic
Description: If the atmosphere’s mass was increased the object would be pulled toward the atmosphere (sky), therefore it would make them lighter not heaver.
Quote: “The spell increases the atmosphere’s mass in a particular area, thus augmenting the pull of gravity and with it, the weight of everything contained in the zone. In gaming terms, it automatically doubles the weight of everything in a 1,500-foot radius.”
Page: 155
Location: Visual Illusion Effect
Type: Logic
Description: 5 square feet is an area not a mass.
Quote: “The image must remain static and have only a maximum mass of 5 square feet.”
Page: 155
Location: Visual Illusion Added Effect
Type: Logic
Description: 5 square feet cannot be a radius in three dimensional space, however 5 feet can.
Quote: “+5 square feet to radius and + 5 to MR of Difficulty.”
Page: 155
Location: Total Illusion Added
Type: Logic
Description: 5 square feet is an area not a volume.
Quote: “The caster can create any inanimate object with a volume not exceeding 5 square feet.”
Page: 171
Location: Weakness Effect
Type: Typo
Description: Thi is not a word.
Quote: “The target of thi spell is spell is temporarily subject to Weakness(as explained in chapter 14)”
Page: 171
Location: Rejection Effect
Type: Typo
Description: Determine is misspelled.
Quote: “the difference between that check, along with possible additional effects of the surrounding environment determin the severity of damage,”
Page: 194
Location: Strengthening a Power
Type: Logic
Description: Shouldn’t the maximum be 5, not 10? And "can not" is one word.
Quote: "Every PP spent on one their powers will give them +10 to their potential Calculation rolls. A character can not increase a Power beyond + 50 bonus. Therefore, the maximum amount of PP a character can spend on a single ability is 10."
Correction:
Quote from: exarkfr on December 15, 2008, 05:12:03 pm
Spanish and French say : +10 per point, max 10 points, for a total of +100 (not +50)
Page: 262-275
Location: (Elan) Modifiers chart(s)
Type: Logic
Description: The Elan level of 50 is not included in the chart. (Chart is accidently non-inclusive).
Quote: Elan lower than 50
...
...
Elan higher than 50
...
...
Error Slayer: Methuselah