Here is my last job. I need to know if the text of the cards are ok. I'm not english, and i dont know if it is all correct. Can you see them and say to me if anything is bad? Thanks.

Before relase the fanmade officially i want to check his text. ^^

Now the basic cards:

And the other cards (Alert = maximum of attachments or allies under one player's control)

And treacheries:

In a few, i will build the sheet, telling the number of each cards and the alert trait.

I have played it and it is hard, and, of course, funny ^^

On bounty hunter card it should be least, not less. And what does this alert keyword do? I don't get it.

Ok thanks.

Alert is equal to the number: number of allies or attachment of the player who has most.

For example, 2 players:

1st player: 2 attachments, 3 allies

2nd player: 1 attachment, 2 allies

...so alert = 3

played this last night. Very fun quest. Has a slight scaling problem as it gets easier with more players.. but still a fine effort. You need to make a quest instruction sheet though

Oh true, multiplayer maybe is easier, they can plan each player no play more than 3 allies neither 3 attachments. True. But it is enough funny to me ^^. I'm thinking about another new fanmade and i hope to finish it before august. Let's see ^^.

Sheet of Through of Folds is coming, sure. Before i wanted to know if my english language is ok in all cards.

Thanks!

The sheet file is done.

Please, can you check it if there are some wrong word?....

Whenever I see one of your threads Mndela (Mandela?) I don't even read the cards, just look at how pretty they are... your art choices are superb!

Yes, Mandela, not the Nelsom man, ^^.

I only chosed a random name and i added some change (quit out a letter).

Thanks for your support.