Worked up a backstory page to go along with the folio covers...
what do you guys think?

is there too much clutter?

Personally, I think all of your folio work is very cool. The only issue I see is one of practicality: I don't think anyone will want to print out a page that's mostly black They're very well designed, though.

I had the same issue with the early versions of my character generator. People liked the character sheet, but nobody wanted to print it because if was full-color and used a lot of ink. So, I made a more black-and-white version which was better suited for printing character changes. In fact, that's the one I use myself; the color one is normally only used for PDF viewing.

Personally, I think all of your folio work is very cool. The only issue I see is one of practicality: I don't think anyone will want to print out a page that's mostly black They're very well designed, though.

I had the same issue with the early versions of my character generator. People liked the character sheet, but nobody wanted to print it because if was full-color and used a lot of ink. So, I made a more black-and-white version which was better suited for printing character changes. In fact, that's the one I use myself; the color one is normally only used for PDF viewing.

You're definitely right on about the practicality issue...

I've taken to doing everything via PDF these days (as far as reviewing/altering character sheets, etc) so I think less about printing hard copies.

Thanks for the input!

Looks nice. The folios are very nice. Don't suppose you could slap this fella on one?

for sure!

that's a sweet pic.
that dude looks all manner of badass

what's his name?

career?

Tengo Ryder. Soldier/Sharpshooter.

Tengo Ryder. Soldier/Sharpshooter.

here ya go

let me know if you need a different format or want anything changed...

PSD

JPEG

Perfect. TY.

I made the official one from the beginner box awhile back for anyone who wants it.